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Chapter 8 - Edward’s Secret

Instead of heading back toward the suburban streets of Reading, Dad steered the pickup truck north, winding up the wooded curves toward Fleetwood. The valley below opened into a patchwork of emerald pastures, dairy barns, and old stone farmhouses.

Marissa and I sat quietly in the cab, the cool breeze rushing through the cracked windows.

"Where are we going, Dad?" Marissa asked, leaning forward between the front seats.

"When your grandfather sold his house two years ago," Dad explained, his eyes fixed on the winding country road, "he didn't sell the detached carriage garage behind the property. The new owners only bought the main house and the primary acre. Edward kept a ninety-nine-year lease on that rear barn. He paid the rent upfront with his union pension."

"Why?" I asked, my heart beginning to race. "Pamela said everything he owned was auctioned off."

"Your mother only auctioned off what was listed in the initial inventory, Marissa," Dad said. "Edward knew Pamela’s weaknesses. He loved her, but he knew she was obsessed with modern appearances—new clothes, new cars, status symbols. She never cared about things that required grease and patience."

Dad turned down a long gravel driveway shaded by towering black walnut trees. We passed a restored colonial stone house, continuing past a split-rail fence toward a weathered red cedar barn sitting near the tree line.

Dad parked near the double barn doors. He stepped out, pulled the brass key from his pocket, and approached the padlock securing the heavy sliding latch. The lock clicked open with a satisfying, oiled snap.

With a firm shove, Dad slid the double doors apart.

Sunlight poured into the barn, illuminating swirling specks of dust that danced over a pristine, forest-green 2012 Subaru Outback.

The vehicle was immaculate. It was clean, polished, and sitting on brand-new Goodyear tires. On the windshield rested a folded piece of cardboard with my name written across it in Edward’s unmistakable handwriting: *CORINNE.*

I stopped walking. My breath hitched in my chest.

"Grandpa bought this three months before he had his stroke," Dad said softly, standing beside the open driver’s door. "He bought it from an old friend who couldn't drive anymore. Edward spent his last healthy summer replacing the head gaskets, flushing the transmission, and putting in a brand-new braking system. He told me: 'A girl who knows how to work with tools deserves a car that will never let her down in a snowstorm.'"

I approached the car slowly, as if touching it might make it vanish like a dream. I ran my fingers along the smooth, cool green paint of the hood. It wasn't flashy. It didn't have heated leather seats or touchscreens. But it was sturdy, dependable, and built with love.

Marissa walked around to the passenger side, her eyes wide with wonder. "He kept this here the whole time?"

"He told me to hold onto the key until Corinne turned eighteen or when she had saved two thousand dollars on her own," Dad smiled, looking at me with misty eyes. "He said, 'Joseph, make sure she saves her own money first. Not because she doesn't deserve a gift, but because she needs to know she is stronger than Pamela’s petty games.' Corrie, you saved nineteen hundred dollars working three nights a week while keeping a 3.8 GPA. You earned this ten times over."

I opened the driver’s door. The interior smelled like cedar, clean vinyl, and that familiar, comforting hint of Edward’s spearmint gum. In the center console sat a brand-new emergency roadside tool kit, complete with jumper cables, a tire pressure gauge, and a socket set.

Beside the steering wheel was a small index card taped to the dashboard:

*Dear Corrie,*

*The bus is fine for learning patience, but the open road is where you find out who you are. Keep the oil checked every three thousand miles. Love, Grandpa Edward.*

I sat down in the driver’s seat, gripped the steering wheel, and let the tears fall freely. For eight months, I had felt small, invisible, and unvalued in my own home. I had believed Pamela’s cruel narrative that I was merely tolerated, a guest who had overstayed her welcome.

But Edward had seen me. He had seen my worth before I even recognized it myself.

Marissa opened the passenger door, slipped inside, and reached across the console to take my hand. "It suits you so much better than that stupid crossover, Corrie."

I laughed through my tears, squeezing her hand tightly. "You can borrow it whenever you need to go to cheer practice."

May you like

Marissa smiled, her eyes bright with genuine happiness. "Only if you let me pay for gas."

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