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Chapter 4 - THE WITNESS

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The lawn erupted into immediate, hysterical chaos.

Guests stood up from their wooden chairs, whispering frantically, pulling out smartphones, and pointing toward the altar. My mother let out a high-pitched, pathetic shriek and collapsed onto a white velvet settee near the front row.

"Thatcher! No!" Sloan screamed, dropping her peony bouquet into the dirt and sprinting toward the altar in her lace gown. "Thatcher, wait! She's lying! She's exaggerating her injury! She fell on purpose yesterday!"

Thatcher stopped three paces from her. He didn't back away, but the look in his dark eyes was so cold, so utterly devoid of affection, that Sloan stopped in her tracks.

"She fell on purpose, Sloan?" Thatcher asked, his voice calm, level, and carrying across the hushed crowd. "She threw herself down twelve marble steps and fractured her tibia just to ruin your rehearsal dinner?"

"Yes! You know how she is!" Sloan sobbed, tears ruining her expensive bridal makeup, leaving black mascara streaks down her cheeks. "She's always been jealous of me! She couldn't stand that I was getting married before her!"

Thatcher reached into his inner tuxedo pocket, pulled out his smartphone, and tapped the screen once.

He walked over to his father, Arthur Montgomery—the formidable senior partner of Montgomery & Croft—and handed him the device.

"Read the message, Dad," Thatcher said softly.

Arthur Montgomery pulled out his reading glasses, unfolded them, and looked down at the screen.

Beside me, Greer leaned down and whispered, "I sent Thatcher the video at eleven o'clock this morning. Along with the hospital diagnostic records and the catering invoice receipt."

Arthur Montgomery's weathered face turned from deep confusion to a dark, terrifying purple rage. He stood up from his chair, towering over the front row, his voice booming across the lawn like a naval cannon.

"Judson!" Arthur bellowed, looking directly at my father.

My father, who was frantically trying to help my mother off the velvet settee, froze dead in his tracks.

"Arthur..." Judson stammered, raising his hands in a placating gesture. "Arthur, please... this is a private family matter... the girls have always had a competitive relationship—"

"Competitive?!" Arthur Montgomery roared, stepping onto the central aisle, holding Thatcher’s phone in his raised hand. "Your younger daughter shoved her sister down a flight of stone stairs, laughed while she lay broken on the floor, and then your wife used a stolen corporate card to pay for the champagne!"

The crowd gasped again—louder this time.

Two of my father’s primary business associates, who were sitting in the fourth row, immediately stood up, pulled their coats over their shoulders, and walked toward the parking lot without saying a single word to him.

"Is this true, Judson?" Arthur demanded, stepping into my father's space. "Did you attempt to charge forty-two thousand dollars to a marine insurance corporate line belonging to Merritt's employer?"

Judson’s jaw worked frantically, but no sound came out. He looked like a man caught in a spotlight holding stolen cash.

"Effective immediately," Arthur Montgomery declared, his voice echoing off the stone facade of the estate, "Montgomery & Croft is terminating all logistics contracts with Braddock Dry Cleaning Enterprises. And my son is leaving this property."

Thatcher walked past Sloan without giving her a single glance. He walked down the center aisle, stopped in front of my wheelchair, and knelt on one knee on the grass.

He looked up at me, his eyes filled with deep, genuine remorse.

"I'm so sorry, Merritt," Thatcher said softly, taking my cold hand in his. "I should have seen what she was months ago. I heard her talking to her mother in the suite yesterday morning... but I didn't want to believe it."

"You don't owe me an apology, Thatcher," I murmured, touching his shoulder. "You got out in time."

"Thank you for sending the video," he said softly. He stood up, looked back at Sloan—who was now kneeling in the dirt near the altar, weeping hysterically while her mother held her—and walked away toward the driveway.

Greer looked down at me, a sharp, triumphant smile on her face.

"Phase one complete," Greer said. "Ready for phase two?"

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I looked at my father, standing alone on the lawn, his business ruined, his daughter’s wedding destroyed, his prestige shattered in front of everyone who mattered to him.

"Let's go home, Greer," I said softly. "The rest we do in court."

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