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Chapter 5 - THE STRUGGLE IN THE HALLWAY

The force of our impact slammed the back of my head against the concrete floor, sending white spots dancing across my vision.

Mark was heavier than me, fueled by an insane, desperate strength. He drove his elbow hard into my ribs, knocking the wind out of my lungs, and scrambled to regain control of the crowbar.

"Ethan!" Caroline shrieked.

I grabbed Mark's wrist with both hands, wrestling the steel bar away as he tried to jam the heavy blunt end into my throat. The metallic smell of duct tape, engine oil, and sweat filled my nose as we rolled across the floor, knocking over a shelf of laundry detergents and bleach bottles.

Meredith was screaming hysterically in the corner, covering her face, completely immobilized by fear and guilt.

"Meredith, help him!" Caroline screamed, rushing forward with the iron frying pan.

Before Caroline could strike, Mark kicked his leg back, striking Caroline's knee and sending her falling sideways onto the tile. Lily let out a high-pitched cry from the doorway.

Seeing my daughter terrified gave me a sudden surge of adrenaline. I bucked my hips, twisted Mark's arm until his joint popped with a sharp crack, and slammed his hand against the washing machine frame.

Mark screamed in pain, dropping the crowbar.

I grabbed the heavy iron bar, rolled over, and swung it with everything I had into the side of Mark's knee.

A sickening crunch echoed through the small laundry room.

Mark let out a gutteral howl of agony, clutching his shattered leg as he collapsed onto his side, thrashing wildly on the floor.

I stood up, panting heavily, blood dripping from my knuckles onto the tile. I pointed the bloody end of the crowbar directly at Mark's face.

"The code," I rasped, my chest heaving, my voice sounding like broken glass. "Give me the code to the door, or I swear to God I will use this bar on your other leg."

Mark lay on the floor, gasping for air, tears of pain leaking from his eyes as he clutched his broken knee. He looked up at me, seeing the absolute, murderous rage in my eyes, and realized I wasn't bluffing.

"0... 6... 1... 4... 1... 6," Mark wheezed, his breath ragged.

June 14th, 2016. The exact date my son Noah was born. The sick, twisted bastard had used my son's birthday as the combination to his underground cell.

"Caroline, hold this," I said, handing the crowbar to my wife, who stood tall despite her bleeding knee, her eyes fixed on Mark with cold hatred. "If he moves an inch, hit him."

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"Gladly," Caroline whispered.

I grabbed my flashlight from the floor and sprinted back down the concrete stairs into the cold, dark corridor below.

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