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Chapter 8 - The Price of Pride

Six months after the scene in the garden, the first real snow of December blanketed Scranton, Pennsylvania.

Vanessa sat at a laminate desk in a windowless room on the second floor of a converted warehouse. The fluorescent lights overhead hummed with a low, maddening drone that had given her a headache by ten that morning.

Her fingers were stiff from typing. *Reyes, V. – Employee ID 4409.*

On her computer screen, endless columns of medical billing codes scrolled past. Every keystroke earned her fractions of a cent toward the seventy-two thousand dollars in restitution she owed to her mother’s estate and the state court fund.

Her monitor held no photos. No pictures of the Greek islands she had planned to visit. No engagement shots taken on the bluffs of Newport with Greg kissing her cheek.

Her phone buzzed against the desk. It was an alert from a lifestyle blog she had forgotten to mute: *Caldwell Foundation Donates $2 Million to Early-Onset Neurological Research.*

Vanessa clicked the notification before she could stop herself.

The screen loaded a high-resolution photograph taken in the atrium of Yale New Haven Hospital.

There stood Eleanor Caldwell, regal as ever in navy cashmere, smiling warmly beside the hospital president. But Eleanor wasn't standing alone.

Beside her was Greg. He looked different—his posture was looser, the stiff country-club polish replaced by an easy, genuine confidence. He was looking down, smiling at the woman standing beside him.

Hannah.

My hair was cut into a soft, shoulder-length bob. I was wearing an elegant, understated forest-green dress. And on my left hand, resting casually against Greg’s forearm, Grandma Evelyn’s sapphire caught the flash of the press cameras.

The caption beneath the photo read:

*“Philanthropist Greg Caldwell and Hannah Reyes announce the establishment of the Evelyn Reyes Memory Care Initiative, dedicated to providing full residential subsidies for low-income patients suffering from vascular dementia.”*

Vanessa dropped the phone onto the desk.

The screen cracked diagonally across Hannah’s smiling face.

She pressed her palms against her eyes, the same way she had seen Hannah do a hundred times during the years when our mother was first losing her mind.

Back then, Vanessa had viewed that gesture as weakness. She had viewed Hannah’s loyalty as the pathetic devotion of a girl who lacked the ambition to climb. She had believed that ruthlessness was the only difference between the people who lived in mansions and the people who cleaned them.

Now, sitting in the cold Pennsylvania drizzle with thirty-two dollars left in her checking account until Friday, the truth settled into her bones like lead:

She had tried to steal a life that wasn't hers to take, and in doing so, she had thrown away the only people who would have loved her even if she had nothing at all.

Her supervisor tapped on the partition of her cubicle. “Break’s over, Reyes. You’ve got forty more patient files to audit before five.”

Vanessa took a slow, shivering breath.

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“Yes, sir,” she said quietly. “I’m working on it now.”

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