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Chapter 7 - The True Cost of Pride

Six months after taking control of Crestview, Palmer Logistics had completely turned around.

Under my new management structure, the company secured three major municipal transport contracts that my father had lost years ago due to poor service and late deliveries.

Revenue grew by forty percent in the first two quarters alone, allowing Crestview to clear the entire delinquent debt load ahead of schedule.

One warm afternoon in July, I drove my modest sedan out to the West Side to visit my grandfather’s old brick house.

As part of the estate settlement, I had bought the house from the trust, preserving it exactly as Grandpa Walter had left it.

When I pulled into the gravel driveway, I saw a rusty secondhand sedan parked near the garage.

Dad was standing in the garden behind the house, wearing worn denim overalls and a faded work shirt, holding a shovel.

He had sold his suburban mansion to satisfy his remaining personal credit card debts and was now renting Grandpa’s small brick house from me at a modest, affordable rate.

When he saw my car, he set the shovel down and wiped his brow with a blue handkerchief.

He looked thinner, weathered by real physical labor, but for the first time in my life, the arrogant, aggressive glare in his eyes was gone, replaced by a quiet, subdued calm.

“Fiona,” Dad said softly, offering a faint, tentative smile. “I didn't expect to see you today.”

“I came to inspect the property grounds,” I said, walking over to the garden bed where fresh tomato plants were growing in neat rows.

Dad nodded, looking down at his dirty hands. “The roof is in good shape. I fixed the porch railing last week... just like your grandfather used to do.”

We stood in silence for a long moment, listening to the birds singing in the old oak trees above us.

“How is Mom?” I asked softly.

“She’s... adjusting,” Dad replied, leaning lightly against his shovel. “She took a part-time job at the local library downtown. She doesn't talk about country clubs or designer bags anymore. She spent three hours yesterday making jam from the bushes in the backyard.”

“And Savannah?”

Dad let out a long, slow sigh, his shoulders sagging slightly. “She’s working as a junior sales clerk at a department store downtown. She’s living in a small one-bedroom apartment near the train tracks. It’s been hard on her, Fiona. Very hard.”

He looked up at me, his eyes filled with a deep, profound sadness.

“She hates me,” Dad whispered. “She blames me for losing everything.”

“She doesn't hate you, Dad,” I said gently. “She just never had to face reality before. You taught her that image was everything, and now she’s learning that image disappears the moment the money runs out.”

Dad bowed his head, tears welling in his aged eyes.

“I failed you, Fiona,” he choked out, his voice cracking with genuine emotion. “I failed you, I failed your mother, and I failed your grandfather. On Christmas morning... when I pushed your suitcase into the snow... I thought I was being a strong father. But I was just a blind, arrogant fool.”

I looked at my father—the man who had terrified me for years with his booming voice and harsh judgments—now standing barefoot in the dirt of his father’s garden, broken and truly humbled.

I stepped forward, closing the distance between us, and placed my hand gently over his calloused knuckles resting on the shovel handle.

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“You don't have to be a titan anymore, Dad,” I whispered softly. “You just have to be a father.”

Dad covered his face with his hands and wept openly in the warm summer sun.

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