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Chapter 5 - The Pawn Shop on Harry Hines

At 8:30 the next morning, the June heat was already rising off the asphalt in waves. I sat in the passenger seat of my father’s Ford F-150, my hands clasped tightly in my lap. Beside me, Dad sat with his hands glued to the steering wheel, his eyes fixed on the metal security bars guarding the front window of Gold & Silver Exchange on Harry Hines Boulevard.

He hadn't slept a wink. The dark circles under his eyes looked like purple bruises, and his face was drawn and pale. He was wearing the same denim shirt he had worn to my graduation dinner the night before, heavily wrinkled and smelling faintly of coffee.

"They open in five minutes," Dad said, his voice rough.

"Dad," I said softly, looking over at him. "Did they leave last night?"

Dad let out a long, ragged exhale. "Monica tried to argue for two hours. She called her sister, she cried, she threatened to sue me for spousal support. But when I pulled out my phone and dialed the non-emergency police line, she realized I wasn't bluffing. She and Paige packed three suitcases each, threw them in the back of Paige's Civic, and drove to her sister's place in Plano."

He turned to look at me, his gray eyes shining with unshed tears.

"I changed the front door locks at three in the morning," he continued. "I packed the rest of her clothes into trash bags and put them in the garage. I am filing for divorce on Monday, Eliza. I've already called a lawyer."

Before I could answer, an elderly man in a black polo shirt stepped out of the front door of the pawn shop, unlocked the iron gate, and rolled it back with a loud, metallic rattle.

"Let's go," Dad said.

We stepped into the cool, air-conditioned interior of the shop. Glass cases lined the floor, filled with watches, power tools, acoustic guitars, and rows of gold chains.

The man behind the counter looked up, giving us a polite nod. "Morning. How can I help you folks today?"

Dad pulled a folded piece of paper from his back pocket—the pawn receipt he had retrieved from Monica’s desk drawer—and laid it flat on the glass counter.

"I'm here to redeem a ticket," Dad said, his voice tense. "Ticket number 4409. A sapphire necklace, a diamond engagement ring, and three gold bangles."

The man picked up the slip, adjusting his reading glasses as he scanned the numbers. He frowned slightly, looking from the ticket to the computer terminal beside him. He typed in the serial number, his fingers clicking rapidly against the keyboard.

My heart began to race. A cold drop of sweat rolled down the back of my neck. What if she sold them outright? What if they were already gone?

"Alright," the clerk said after an agonizing thirty seconds. "Ticket 4409. Placed on hold March 18th by a Monica Sutton. Principal amount loan was $9,000. With the accumulated interest and holding fees over ninety days, the total buyout balance to redeem the items today is $10,450."

Ten thousand four hundred and fifty dollars.

My breath caught in my throat. I knew Dad’s emergency savings account only had about seven thousand dollars in it—he had mentioned it a few months ago when discussing home repairs.

Dad didn't hesitate. He pulled out a cashier's check he had gotten from his bank thirty minutes prior, along with his personal debit card.

"Here is seven thousand five hundred on the cashier's check," Dad said, handing over the paper. Then he slid a thick, pristine cream envelope across the counter. "And here is a cashier's check for three thousand dollars from Helen Warren's account to cover the remainder."

Grandma had insisted on coming to the bank with us that morning to draw the funds directly from her savings. She had told Dad that securing my mother's memory was worth more than any number in a bank ledger.

The clerk inspected the checks, checked Dad’s driver’s license, and nodded. "Alright, Mr. Warren. Give me five minutes to retrieve the box from the high-security vault in the back."

Those five minutes felt like five years. I leaned against the glass counter, clutching my mother’s silver pendant—the only small piece of jewelry she had given me before she died—between my thumb and forefinger.

The clerk returned carrying a small, navy-blue velvet box wrapped in a clear plastic evidence bag. He sliced the plastic open with a box cutter, opened the velvet lid, and turned the box toward us.

There they were.

The cushion-cut sapphire necklace caught the overhead fluorescent lights, gleaming a deep, brilliant ocean blue. Beside it lay my mother's platinum engagement ring, its center diamond sparkling untouched, surrounded by the three simple, elegant gold bangles my grandfather had bought her when I was born.

A choked, strangled sob escaped my throat. I reached out with trembling fingers, touching the smooth, cool metal of the ring.

"They're all here," I whispered, tears blurring my vision. "Every single piece."

Dad closed his eyes, leaning his forehead against the edge of the glass counter, his shoulders shaking silently. "Thank God," he breathed. "Thank God."

The clerk pushed the blue box toward me. "Sign here on the redemption line, miss."

I signed my name with a steady hand. I took the velvet box, tucked it securely into my purse, and zipped it shut.

As we walked back out into the bright Texas sunlight, Dad turned to me, his hands shoved deep into his pockets.

"Eliza," he said softly. "We're going to Denton today."

I paused, looking at him. "To Denton?"

"We're going to the university admissions office," Dad declared, his voice filled with a fierce, quiet determination he hadn't shown in years. "We are paying your $1,200 housing deposit in cash. We are securing your dorm room. And then we are meeting with the financial aid director to make sure your fall tuition is completely cleared."

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He looked me straight in the eyes, his face full of remorse.

"You are going to college, Eliza. You are going to live on campus, you are going to study biology, and no one—no one—is ever going to take your hard work away from you again."

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