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Chapter 4 - THE MORNING OF THE WEDDING

(1,500 words)

The sun rose on Saturday in a clear, brilliant blue sky.

By 8:00 AM, the bridal suite at the historic garden venue was buzzing with energy. Hair stylists adjusted curling irons, makeup artists laid out their brushes, and the subtle scent of fresh white roses filled the high-ceilinged room.

I sat in the central chair wearing a white silk robe, sipping a hot mimosa. Lena stood beside me, holding a tablet with a master checklist.

“Security is stationed at the three main entry points,” Lena reported in a low, professional tone. “Every guard has a photo of the special-effects vendor your mother tried to hire. If their truck pulls up, they’ll be turned away at the gate.”

“What about personal items?” I asked, watching the stylist pin a strand of dark hair into place.

“I instructed the greeters and venue staff to keep a close eye on large totes or suspicious bags brought in by guests,” Lena said with a subtle wink. “If your sister brings a purse big enough to hold a smoke canister, we’ll check it at the coat room.”

I let out a long breath. “Thank you, Lena.”

At 9:30 AM, my mother and Chloe arrived.

Chloe was carrying an oversized canvas tote bag slung over her shoulder. She looked pale, her lips pressed into a thin line, and she barely acknowledged the other bridesmaids as she set her bag down near the window.

Mom walked straight over to my chair, leaning down to kiss my cheek. Her tone was overly cheerful, an obvious attempt to act as if last night’s confrontation had been forgotten.

“Oh, Bonnie, your hair looks lovely!” Mom exclaimed, smoothing the silk of my robe. “Such a big day. Everything is going to be so memorable.”

I caught Chloe’s eye in the mirror. She was hovering near her canvas bag, reaching inside with one hand.

Before she could pull anything out, Lena stepped smoothly between Chloe and the vanity, holding a hanger with Chloe’s bridesmaid dress.

“Chloe, hi!” Lena said brightly. “Let’s get your dress prepped in the dressing room. Venue policy requires all personal bags to be stored in the locked security lockers down the hall so they don't clutter the photo background.”

Chloe froze, her hand still inside her tote. “What? I need my bag here. I have my makeup.”

“We have a full beauty station right here,” Lena insisted gently, taking the canvas tote directly out of Chloe’s hands before my sister could protest. “Don't worry, I’ll personally lock it in the security room and hand you the key.”

Chloe’s face flushed red. “Wait! Give that back!”

“Chloe, please,” I said calmly from the styling chair, looking at her through the mirror. “It’s venue policy. All bags go in the lockers.”

Mom stepped forward, her eyebrows knitting together in anger. “Bonnie, really! She’s pregnant! What if she needs a snack or her vitamins?”

“The suite is catered with food and water, Mom,” I replied smoothly. “She’ll be fine.”

Lena walked out of the room with the canvas bag. Chloe glared at me with pure, unadulterated venom, stomped into the private changing stall, and slammed the door shut so hard the mirrors rattled.

Mom turned to me, her voice dropping into a harsh, furious whisper. “You are acting like a dictator today, Bonnie. Your sister is trying to participate, and you’re treating her like a criminal!”

I looked my mother straight in the eyes.

“I am treating her like a guest who refuses to respect my rules,” I said softly. “Now, please enjoy getting your makeup done, or go wait in the garden with Dad.”

Mom gasped, clutching her pearls, but the absolute firmness in my voice silenced her. She sat down in the corner chair, pulling out her phone with trembling fingers.

A minute later, my phone buzzed on the vanity.

It was a text from my bank: Alert: Card Declined at Automated Carrier System.

I smiled faintly. My father had just tried to use his phone to pay a bill, only to discover his line had been disconnected from my account that morning.

A second notification popped up from my father’s direct number: Why is my cell service turned off?!

I didn't reply. I flipped the phone facedown, picked up my mimosa, and let the makeup artist apply my lipstick.

At 11:30 AM, I put on my dress.

It was a ivory A-line gown made of heavy silk, with a subtle V-neckline and a sweeping train. When I stepped out into the center of the suite, the bridesmaids gasped. Even my mother went quiet, her hand hovering over her mouth as tears welled in her eyes.

For a brief, fleeting moment, she looked at me not as a manager or a resource, but as her daughter—a bride standing in the sunlight.

“You look... beautiful, Bonnie,” Mom whispered softly.

“Thank you, Mom,” I said gently.

Then Chloe walked out of the changing stall, wearing her blush-pink bridesmaid dress. She glanced at me, let out a short, audible sniff, and turned to Mom.

“My bump looks weird in this cut,” Chloe complained loudly, smoothing the fabric over her waist. “The photographer needs to take all my angles from the left.”

The moment passed. Mom instantly turned her attention away from me, rushing over to adjust Chloe’s sash, fussing over her hair, and reassuring her that she looked like an angel.

I didn't feel sad. I didn't feel hurt.

I turned around, adjusted my veil in the mirror, and picked up my bouquet of white peonies.

Outside, I could hear the string quartet beginning to play in the garden. Ninety-nine guests were taking their seats beneath the summer trees. Daniel was waiting for me at the end of the aisle in his dark charcoal tuxedo.

My father walked into the suite, wearing his rented tuxedo. He looked agitated, still checking his dead cell phone, but when he saw me, he paused.

“Ready, Dad?” I asked smoothly.

May you like

He looked at me, then at Chloe, and finally let out a heavy sigh. “I suppose so. Let’s get this over with.”

I took a deep breath, held my bouquet firmly against my waist, and walked out into the sunshine.

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