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Chapter 9 - The Surrender of the Ring

"Ethan," I said softly.

He froze, hope flickering across his features like a dying candle. "Yes, Claire? Anything. Whatever you want."

I reached for my left hand.

Slowly, deliberately, I slid the half-carat diamond ring off my ring finger. It was a modest stone, the one he had proudly told me he had 'saved for months' to buy—though I now knew he had put it on an overdrawn store credit card.

I took his right hand, turned his palm upward, and placed the ring gently in the center of his trembling palm.

"Claire... no," he choked out, his fingers trying to close around mine. "Don't do this. Not on Christmas Eve. Please. I stood up to them! I ripped the contract!"

"You ripped the contract after you saw my stars, Ethan," I said, pulling my hand away cleanly. "Ten minutes ago, you told me that if I loved you, I would sign away my dignity, my career, and my independence. You stood right there and watched your mother call me an old, desperate woman looking for a meal ticket, and you nodded your head."

"I was pressured! My parents—"

"A man who lets his family humiliate the woman he intends to marry is not a man," I told him, my voice flat, firm, and final. "He’s just a child wearing an expensive suit he hasn't paid for."

Margaret stepped forward, her voice suddenly high, desperate, and sickeningly sweet. "General Donovan... Claire... please, let us sit down and start over. Let me open a fresh bottle of wine. We can discuss this like civilized adults. Ethan truly cares for you! Think of what a wonderful team you two would make! With your rank and our family’s connections in Virginia—"

"Your family's connections are currently thirty days away from bankruptcy court, Margaret," I said coldly. "And I don't negotiate with hostile forces."

I turned away from the table and walked toward the foyer.

"Claire!" Ethan yelled, chasing after me into the hallway. "Claire, you can't just leave! What am I supposed to tell people? We already sent out engagement announcements!"

I reached the coat rack where my charcoal wool coat was hanging. I lifted it off the hook myself, slipped my arms into the sleeves, and buttoned it up to the throat.

It wasn't cashmere. It wasn't designer. But it was mine. It had been bought with honest money earned through honest service, and it kept out the cold better than anything inside this house ever could.

I turned at the open front door to look back at Ethan Mercer one last time.

He stood under the grand chandelier, clutching his cheap diamond ring, looking small, pathetic, and utterly alone.

"Tell them whatever you like, Ethan," I said quietly. "Tell them you met a clerk who wasn't interested in being managed."

I stepped out onto the porch into the crisp, clean Virginia night air.

May you like

The heavy front door clicked shut behind me, severing the past seven months of my life with a single, decisive snap.

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