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Chapter 4 - The Unpacked Truth

The drive home from the welfare office felt like moving underwater. The world outside my windshield was a blur of gray asphalt and autumn trees, but my mind was entirely consumed by the image of a sixteen-year-old boy sitting alone in a school computer lab, meticulously vetting strangers to see if they were worthy of protecting his little sister.

When I walked through our front door, the house was empty. The clock on the microwave read 3:15 PM. School would be out in twenty minutes, and Jace and Josie would be walking through the front door just like they did every afternoon.

Except nothing about them felt ordinary anymore.

I walked down the hallway straight to Jace’s bedroom. The door was wide open, exactly as he had left it that morning. The bed was unmade, a textbook lay face-down on the oak desk, and right in the center of the room sat the olive-green duffel bag.

For the first time since they arrived, I didn't look at the bag as a symbol of rejection. I looked at it as a battle-scarred shield. It had carried every piece of stability Jace had managed to salvage from a chaotic, unforgiving world.

I knelt down in front of it. My hands hovered over the heavy canvas zipper for a moment before I gently pulled it open.

This time, I wasn't intruding. I was seeking understanding.

Inside, neatly stacked beneath a few changes of clothes, were the composition notebooks Angela had mentioned. I pulled the top one out and opened the cover.

The pages were filled with handwriting—neat, precise, and obsessive. There were lists of names, dates, addresses, and frantic notes scribbled in the margins.

The Millers (Oak Creek): Married 8 years. No biological children. Medical records show 5-year fertility struggle. References confirm stable income and community ties. Teacher (history) and nurse. Patient history of loss.

My breath caught in my throat as I read my own life history summarized in a teenager’s neat, clinical handwriting. He hadn't just looked us up; he had analyzed us under a microscope. He had looked at our medical struggles, our tax brackets, our marriage certificate, and our employment history to ensure we weren't just another couple looking for a polished accessory to complete their suburban aesthetic.

Further down the page, there were notes on other families. Families who had made it to the interview stage before Jace deliberately blew the interview.

The Hendersons: Too clean. Looked at Josie like she was a puppy. Ignored me completely. Dealbreaker activated: acted aggressively indifferent.

The Barclays: Wealthy. Big house. Wife made comments about 'fixing troubled kids.' Dealbreaker activated: wore dirty boots on purpose and refused to speak.

He had engineered his own rejections. Every single time a family walked away, it wasn't because they didn't want Josie—it was because Jace had made sure they were too terrified or uncomfortable to take the risk. He had protected his little sister by making himself the unacceptable cost of admission.

Until he met us.

"What are you doing?"

The voice came from the doorway, sharp and breathless.

I jumped, dropping the notebook back onto the pile, and spun around.

Jace was standing in the doorway. He had dropped his backpack by the front door, and he was staring at me with wide, panicked eyes, his chest heaving as if he had sprinted all the way from the bus stop. His knuckles were white where he gripped the doorframe.

"Jace," I breathed, scrambling to my feet.

"You shouldn't be in here," he said, his voice cracking with a terrifying mix of anger and absolute humiliation. "You had no right to go through my stuff. I told you—"

"I talked to Angela today," I interrupted gently, stepping away from the duffel bag so he wouldn't feel cornered.

Jace froze. The color drained entirely from his face, leaving him looking ghost-white under the harsh afternoon light spilling through the window. All the fight, all the defensive bluster evaporated in a single second, leaving behind a terrified sixteen-year-old boy who had just been caught trying to control a world that had always denied him any power.

"She told me everything," I continued, keeping my voice as steady as possible, though my own tears were threatening to spill over. "She told me about the files. She told me about the other families. And she told me about you."

Jace stared at the floor, his jaw clenching so hard a muscle twitched in his cheek. He wouldn't look me in the eye.

"I had to," he whispered, his voice trembling violently. "If I didn't check them out, nobody else would. People look at kids like us and they see a burden. They don't see a little girl who loves dinosaurs and draws pictures of Godzilla. They just see a package deal they want to return when things get hard."

"Oh, Jace," I choked out, closing the distance between us and stopping just a few feet away.

"You would have walked away too if you knew what I was really like," he muttered, his voice breaking as the first tear finally slipped down his cheek, cutting a clean path through the dust on his face. "Everyone walks away. I just... I wanted to make sure that if someone finally stayed, they stayed for both of us. Not just because Josie was cute."

I didn't care about keeping a professional distance. I didn't care about rules or boundaries. I stepped forward and wrapped my arms around his tall, rigid frame, pulling him against me in a fierce, unbreakable embrace.

For three seconds, Jace stayed as stiff as a board, completely overwhelmed by the sudden physical contact. But then, with a ragged, shuddering gasp that sounded like a dam finally breaking after years of pressure, his arms came up.

He wrapped his long arms around my shoulders, burying his face in my neck, and sobbed.

It wasn't the quiet crying of a polite teenager. It was the deep, wracking grief of a boy who had spent sixteen years carrying the weight of the world on his own shoulders, finally realizing he didn't have to carry it alone anymore.

"You're safe now, Jace," I whispered into his hair, holding him as tightly as I could. "You don't have to vet us anymore. We're not going anywhere."

We stayed like that on the hardwood floor of the sage-green bedroom for a long time, holding onto each other while the afternoon sun dipped lower behind the trees.

And as I rubbed his back, I noticed something out of the corner of my eye.

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Jace’s foot, clad in its scuffed sneaker, nudged the olive-green duffel bag an inch further away from the bed.

The zipper remained open.

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